Joe Biagini - Relief from the Rule 5

[charlielittle11]

One of the lone bright spots in the bullpen outside of Roberto Osuna. Biagini has turned into a surprisingly impressive Rule 5 Draft selection and is easily a player to root for.

 

Check out my post about him below:

 

http://6ixsports.com/joe-biagini-relief-rule-5/

[gbill2004]

Great read and thanks for explaining the rule 5 draft. Your grammar and spelling is very good.

[Sparky12]

Good read, thanks

[King]

Thanks for posting. Great article!

[KingKat]

One of the lone bright spots in the bullpen outside of Roberto Osuna. Biagini has turned into a surprisingly impressive Rule 5 Draft selection and is easily a player to root for.

 

Check out my post about him below:

 

http://6ixsports.com/joe-biagini-relief-rule-5/

 

Just going to give you a light critique that hopefully you'll find constructive (or at least not too snotty). I'm hardly an expert in English and I make no claims to being a good writer but I did notice a few things that seemed a little off.

 

Firstly, You use the passive voice a lot. Is that a bad thing? I'm not so sure but I do know that a lot of people frown upon it. I think if nothing else you should be aware of it especially if it's not a conscious decision. I just get the general sense that there's a lack of consistency with verb tense choices. I think it's something you might want to look at. Sorry for how vague this critique is.

 

Secondly, you use a lot of one sentence paragraphs. This is a bit of a pet peeve of mine. I understand, for instance, why you might want to separate out the different points relative to the Rule 5 draft but maybe bullets points could have been used as an alternative to a series of one sentence paragraphs in that case.

 

O.K. Hope you don't mind the feedback and good luck with the blog!

[LGBJ29]

Just a quick error I noticed:

 

"In 21 innings with the Blue Jays, Biagini already has a record of 3-1 with a 0.86 ERA and a 1.095 ERA. He has 7.3 Ks per 9 and 2.6 BB per 9."

 

I believe the bolded should read WHIP. Thanks for posting!

[Angrioter]

One of the lone bright spots in the bullpen outside of Roberto Osuna. Biagini has turned into a surprisingly impressive Rule 5 Draft selection and is easily a player to root for.

 

Check out my post about him below:

 

http://6ixsports.com/joe-biagini-relief-rule-5/

 

Gold. Gracias!!

[charlielittle11]

Thank you for the advice!

[THANOS]

Great article man!

 

Here's a surprisingly great article on him from Sportsnet, posted today:

 

http://www.sportsnet.ca/baseball/mlb/blue-jays-biagini-good-lucky/

[Captain Adama]

Great article man!

 

Here's a surprisingly great article on him from Sportsnet, posted today:

 

http://www.sportsnet.ca/baseball/mlb/blue-jays-biagini-good-lucky/

 

The article was very well written,

 

See the comments if you're a masochist.

[spats]

Welcome to the board and thanks for the post. Keep them coming.

[THANOS]

The article is fine for Sportsnet distribution but the Statcast analysis is questionable.

 

How would you approach the analysis of the exit velocity stats?